Title for my documentary

This is a ruff idea of what my title sequence will look like. It consist of a time lapse of my Farther drawing out the title in a comic speech bubble, which is a birds eye view camera shot.

In-depth analysis of what I'm going to add to my documentary

1. music
For my preliminary task I struggled to find the right music to go with my documentary so I had no music playing in the background. I think adding music would make the documentary more interesting and intriguing to the audience.

2. Camera shots/angles 
For my interview scenes my camera angel was very low and was look upwards to the interviewee. I will change this by getting a better tripod and centralising it to the interviewee. I think this would improve my documentary a lot because you are not looking up at the interviewee all the time, and people might think I chose the angle on purpose so he comes across bigger and better than every one else.

3.Editing 
In stead of me saying the question on camera I will edit it out and put the question on the screen, this gives the documentary a more professional look to it.

4.Title
For my title sequence I am going to get my farther to right the title. from a birds eye view shot and will be a time laps. the same with the question that appear on screen.

Feedback from my preliminary task

My preliminary task final documentary

Analysis of stills from my documentary

Risk Assessment

with only filming in my house and my dads studio there was not a great deal of risk while filming.

My Documentary Plan

 For the three days of planing, filming and editing every thing went according to plan with there being no technical difficulties.