Title for my documentary

This is a ruff idea of what my title sequence will look like. It consist of a time lapse of my Farther drawing out the title in a comic speech bubble, which is a birds eye view camera shot.

In-depth analysis of what I'm going to add to my documentary

1. music
For my preliminary task I struggled to find the right music to go with my documentary so I had no music playing in the background. I think adding music would make the documentary more interesting and intriguing to the audience.

2. Camera shots/angles 
For my interview scenes my camera angel was very low and was look upwards to the interviewee. I will change this by getting a better tripod and centralising it to the interviewee. I think this would improve my documentary a lot because you are not looking up at the interviewee all the time, and people might think I chose the angle on purpose so he comes across bigger and better than every one else.

3.Editing 
In stead of me saying the question on camera I will edit it out and put the question on the screen, this gives the documentary a more professional look to it.

4.Title
For my title sequence I am going to get my farther to right the title. from a birds eye view shot and will be a time laps. the same with the question that appear on screen.

Feedback from my preliminary task